Sunday Morning
Lift me up a little higher
So I can see over the Monday morning blues that are already starting to set in
And I can move beyond the mistakes I made last week
Heal whatever problems are testing my faith
In my body, my mind, my spirit
Because I desire
To have the physical strength to handle whatever obstacles are sent to make me stronger
I desire
To have enough wisdom to make decisions untainted by present circumstances or worldly desires
I desire
To be filled with enough patience and peace to wait on what is meant for me
Lift me up a little higher
Not so I can rise above others
And not so I can be more than I need to be
But so I can pull as many as possible up with me
And they can benefit from the journey I have been promised and I will have your favor
Because I shied away from greed, selfishness and pettiness
I give all I have with every heave of my chest and bat of my eyelash
I will not get tired, I will not give up, I will not give out
So in the end
I can be lifted up a little higher
Poem has been submitted to Thursday Poets Rally Week 34 (December 2-8)
I like your site
Thanks! I read some of the poems under Section – Children’s Stuff in your blog. Very cute!
This is cool,
you can lift yourself up too.
simply stay cool….
Happy Wednesday!
You are represented as fresh poets to explore, yet not a participant until you place your entry in…
You are invited to attend poets rally week 34, read the agreement and place your link in when you are ready, have fun! Poetry awards are given upon participation on or by Sunday.
Happy Friday!
Jingle,
Where do I place my poem?
Very noble goals and a well constructed poem. I like it.
Thanks Dan! And thanks for stopping by and reading a little of my poetry. Do you write as well?
Glad to see you in….
Have fun reading others…
Amazing flow…sounds soothing to ears.. 🙂
Regards~ Sayandeep
Thanks for the kudos!
liked the way it starts and was happy with its end…
Cheers!!!
I’m glad you enjoyed it… Thanks for reading!
Great poem! 🙂
Thanks for reading…
Rise up above it then girl!
I like this inspiring poem. Well written and well said. I think we all feel that way every now and then. Great expression, happy rally!
I think our minds were on the same wavelength this week 🙂
Very beautiful imagination..
Take a look on my poetry..
Thanks for the read…
This is too good…
Wonderful creation..
I want to be lifted up a little higher too 🙂
I’m glad yoe enjoyed it! I hope you were inspired 🙂
I want you to win the lottery so you can go forth and do good deeds.
Thanks Drew! I really enjoyed your piece.
Thanks for joining the rally with this piece! I particularly enjoyed the opening lines of “Lift me up a little higher / So I can see over.” “Monday morning blues” can sound cliched, but your lead-in to it here gives it a new angle. Kudos!
Thank you so much. I’m glad to know that a familiar phrase still works sometimes 🙂
Lovely poem! Powerful sentiments, shared with an unafraid voice. Fantastic!
Have a look at my entry, if you want to return the favour:
http://thoughtunchained.wordpress.com/2010/12/02/red-planet-writer/
Thanks for the kind words!
very optimistic and motivating 🙂
Thanks a lot 🙂
Keep on going! What a great anthem!
JP
http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2010/12/03/eyes-in-a-room/
I loved your piece too!
good poem.. very inspiring 🙂 lovely entry for the Poets Rally, CuC 🙂
Here is my Rally Poem
Thanks, I will gladly read your entry as well
There’s a great serenity in your words…enjoyed reading you.
Thanks for checking out my work…
A well done piece, enjoyed the statement of standards!
Thanks A.B.!
You are quite the old soul!
I actually hear that from people a lot 🙂
Very inspiring and strong. I’m impressed with your words and conviction!
Thanks! I browsed through your site a few times. You’re so in love so your posts are very refreshing reads 🙂
Very nice, smooth soothing flow and positive message. good read thanks for sharing
thanks for the kind words and thanks for stopping by…
very heartfelt and inspiring. Beautiful thoughts for the heart, a wonderful way to begin a week or day. Beautiful, thank you 🙂
Thanks for the compliments! I hope your week gets better and better! BTW, I love the images you use on your site. Beautiful!
Ah ! what a beginning !!! Loved those lines .. Inspiring 🙂
I’m glad you like it. Thanks for commenting!
“I give all I have with every heave of my chest and bat of my eyelash”
Very cool line, very cool poem. Kinda like a modern day female King David writing a psalm.
Thank you for sharing. Thank you for this poem.
Thank you! hmmmm, female King David. I like that 🙂
That is a great opening set of lines!
“Lift me up a little higher
So I can see over the Monday morning blues”
I wish we could all have someone to lift us up.
I was a little worried about the opening line but people seem to like it so I will worry no more 🙂 Thanks!
ChUC, I would like to feature this poem on my site in a segment I call Poetic License. The months are filled up until April, so it would be added to April. You will get a link back to your blog and full credit for the poem. Also three times a year I will post the previous four months of poetry into one large post, yours included.
If you would like to see the first Poetic License to see what it looks like before deciding, here is the link. (http://morningerection.wordpress.com/2010/09/20/poetic-license/). Thank you.
Sounds great! I will check out the site and get back to you this evening. Thanks for stopping by and happy Wednesday!
Some pretty inspiring goodness. Heads are held a little higher now.
Thanks for stopping by and commenting!
nice piece 🙂
Thanks! I’ll have to check out your site as well.
Very inspiring piece. I could ‘hear’ your voice… sounded like a spoken word piece to me. I share your desires… thank you for putting them into beautiful words.
Lesley-Anne
I do a lot of spoken word. Sometimes I write a piece specifically for performing. I actually wrote this one just for reading but others have told me it could be a speken word piece as well. Maybe I’ll spit it and see how it goes 🙂
Thank you so much for encouraging me.
Thank you for reading. It’s easy to encourage but it’s much harder to be encouraged 🙂 I hope 2011 is the beginning of new and wonderful things for you.
love your blog, your poetry is impressive!
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welcome back, missed your presence.
cheers.